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|Ver. 2, Working toward a smoother melody|


Kiddo has to express the bare

brittle facts of the matter, before

she can make the words seem beautiful___

again.

Using symbolism has

its place, however, so does

the straight truth.

If you want decoration, you’ll just have to wait___

because a direct message

no matter how disturbing it may be

stands up for itself, even though it is not

a painted melody & mastery of word usage___.