No sugar

This is the roughest recording I could manage. The mic on my laptop doesn't pick up my guitar very well etc. As well, I started this song this morning (meaning, regardless of lowest quality recording, it's rough on its own since it's fresh as can be). It has a doppelganger, one song is all sweet/love/sugar (it's questionable if that's my style at all) & this morning while working on the first song I decided to write its opposite: sad, no sugar___ no love. It being a holiday___ my brother & I drove out to see family. We share a great deal of musical tastes that are of wide variety, & what he was playing in the car seriously tweaked something in my head. The guy was all over the place w/ guitar, the music was sloppy & the guy would literally squeal as opposed to hitting a high note. I sat there thinking: & this guy is as popular as a 'straightedge' artist can be in the punk/whatever scene___ & making money off of THAT sound. Yeah___ so, here is my roughest & most unpolished piece, w/ as little practice as possible. As well only half of the first verse (didn't want to torture you guyz too much). Lyrics (which may not remain the same):

No_ no_ there's no sugar in my bowl
just me swimming in a dream
that may be the death of me
no_ no_ there's no sugar in my bowl
just a dream I hope won't drown me